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Persuasive Essay On The Scarlet Ibis


Character Analysis

Brother is a very driven person. He's driven by love, family, friendship, intelligence, physical strength endurance, and by deep connections with nature. He's also driven by some difficult emotions, like shame, guilt, and insecurity. He's an intense kid. Like most intense characters in tragic stories, his intensity contributes to the tragedy. As you know, the big tragedy in "The Scarlet Ibis" is the death of seven-year-old Doodle, which occurs when Brother is about thirteen.

Brother's memory of Doodle, from birth to death, is the focus of the "The Scarlet Ibis." The fact that this story is framed as a memory complicates any analysis of Brother. As we discuss in "Narrator Point of View" and "Writing Style," it's important to recognize that his memory is colored by his grief and guilt. Because Brother highlights all the things he did wrong, we might leave the story with a negative impression of him, and forget that he was just a child when all this happened. We should be careful of judging him by the same standards we would an adult in the same situation. Brother, whether he admits it or not, shares the blame for Doodle's death with the other characters.

Since Brother analyzes himself only in terms of his relationship with Doodle, it's hard to see him as a person in his own right. For example we don't even know his name. "Brother" is what Doodle calls him. By omitting his own name, Brother's identity seems intimately connected to his role as Doodle's brother. We also don't know how old he is now, or whether he still lives on the family farm or is just there for a visit. We don't know what he does living or, or if he has his own family and children. This kind of information would probably help us understand how the 1918 tragedy impacted his life. But, by leaving out this information, Brother emphasizes that he lives in the past. No matter what his present life is like he will always be back in the Doodle years, reliving every moment.

Conformist or Nonconformist?

Regardless or where you live, or when, you'll probably encounter conflicts between fitting in and doing your own thing. Some communities and groups encourage diversity and individuality. Other communities and groups focus on sameness and group identity. Although we don't hear much about Brother's community, we can infer that there is lots of pressure to not be seen as different. At the very least, tell that Brother feels lots of pressure not to be seen as different.

Brother says he's "embarrassed at having a brother that age [five] who [can't] walk" (3.1). He claims that his interest in seeing Doodle walk is "only because [he's] ashamed of having a crippled brother" (3.18). We can also consider the chilling moment where Brother decides to "kill [Doodle] by smothering him with a pillow" because he's so ashamed of having a brother with physical disabilities and possibly mental disabilities (1.5).

This suggests that Brother, at the ripe age of six, believes that Doodle's deficiencies place the entire family in a shadow of shame. This is incredibly sad. When a six-year-old boy wants to kill his brother to fit in, something is horribly wrong. From that perspective, the story can be seen as an indictment, or strong accusation, against the community. It also suggests that Brother is an extreme conformist, a person willing to do anything to fit in, even if it means getting rid of the brother who can never fit in.

But why is Brother so terrified of not fitting in? If you've ever been to school, you know the answer to that question. He might be excluded from certain activities and social events. He might be picked on, made fun of, and even beat up. It's likely that Brother has already seen, heard, or even experienced what happens to people who are different. We think that's what's going on in the following passage:

"Aw, come on, Doodle. […] You can do it. Do you want to be different from everybody else when you start school?"

"Does it make any difference?"

"It certainly does."
(4.6, 7, 8)

Brother isn't just afraid for himself. He's also afraid for Doodle. He doesn't want Doodle to be hurt. He's trying to protect Doodle from the cruel world. We all know, school can be a pretty rough place.

Doodle's comment in this passage is most interesting. Brother has just asked him if he wants to be different. Doodle's reply (in the form of a question) has at least two possible meanings. On the one hand, Doodle's asking if it matters to Brother what Doodle wants. If Doodle says he doesn't care about fitting in, it probably wouldn't matter to Brother. But Brother doesn't take it that way. He seems to think Doodle is asking if it's important to fit it. And Doodle might well be asking either one or both of those questions. He might also be saying that he doesn't think he can fit in at all, period. He might be suggesting that the whole project is futile. Nothing Brother can do will make him normal.

In any case, the exchange does seem to paint Brother as believing in doing what ever it takes to fit it in with the majority. This is rather ironic when we consider that the act of teaching Doodle to walk, and then to row, swim, etc. is an act of rebellion, and an act of nonconformity.

As we discuss in the doctor's "Character Analysis," bed rest and extremely restricted activity were the standard medical prescriptions for kids like Doodle. Brother refuses to accept limitations, even when they come from experts and authority figures, like his parents and the doctor. He sees past Doodle's difference, and realizes that Doodle is capable of much, much more than anyone believes. He intuits what future medical science would state as fact – that exercise is good for the heart.

So is Brother a conformist or a nonconformist? What do you think?

Ace Athlete, Nature Lover Extraordinaire, and Big Brother

As we mention in Brother's intro, he is one driven young man, and he has tons of physical stamina. Just try and find a place in the story where he complains about being tired or sick. He's all about enjoying his environment in a very physical way, including "running, jumping, […] climbing vines," climbing trees, etc (1.4).

Brother not only wants to explore his surrounding physically, but with all of his senses as well. He's constantly telling us how the natural world looks, feels, and smells. Think of the "graveyard flowers" which communicate through their smell "the names of [the] dead" (1.1). Consider the way he talks about the "green dimness where the palmetto fronds whispered by the stream" at Old Woman Swamp (3.4). He can tell you the name of every bird, flower, tree he sees. Whatever is going on with Brother, he always connects it back to nature.

The natural world is his world and he's in harmony with it. He claims his motivations for encouraging Doodle's physical development are based only in selfish shame and pride. But an earlier statement suggests it goes much deeper:

[…] I wanted more than anything else someone to race to Horsehead Landing, someone to box with […]. I wanted a brother. (1.4)

Sure, this can be considered a selfish desire. He wants a brother, but only if said brother is able do the things Brother likes to do. On the other hand, is it so selfish? Probably not. We all yearn for a companion with whom we can share the things we love. Of course, if we force somebody into a role that doesn't suit them, and ignore the other person's interests, selfishness becomes a big issue.

Even though some of Brother's motivations come from pride and shame, he really does forge a genuine connection with Doodle. The bond between Doodle and Brother is largely based in a mutual appreciation for natural beauty. Doodle wants to be with Brother and he wants to share Brother's life. It's not all one-sided either. The story-telling is a good example. Storytelling is something Doodle teaches Brother. It fits in naturally with Brother's interests, and allows Doodle to bring something tangible to the table.

So, the problem isn't really that Brother tries to turn Doodle into something he isn't. Doodle and Brother share a lot of interests. The real problem comes up when Brother learns that Doodle will have to leave the natural world of home for what can be a pretty unnatural world – the world of school.

In school, from Brother's point of view, nobody is going to care that Brother and Doodle love nature. Nope, brains and body are what matter there. Brother doesn't seem to be worried about Doodle's brain. He knows Doodle is a smart kid. It's the body that's the issue. Brother is afraid of what might happen to both of them if Doodle isn't physically on the same level as the majority of the other children. He knows from his experience in Doodle's early years that Doodle's physical issues can easily be misinterpreted as mental disabilities.

Some reader's see the death of the ibis as a warning to Brother, a warning that he doesn't understand until it's too late. As we discuss in "What's Up With the Ending?" Brother seems to be suggesting this as well, at least on some level. If you subscribe to this view, you might interpret Brother's failure to read the warning as a symptom of his loss of connection with the natural world during that time in the story.

Or, we could say that because Brother sees that the ibis dies as a result of natural processes, he can put Doodle's death in some sort of perspective. For him, Doodle's death is the worst thing in the world. He feels like a murderer. He might find some solace in watching the continual cycles of birth and death so vivid in nature. Imagining Doodle as part of that cycle might give him enough comfort to keep from driving himself mad with guilt.

Even though Brother is tied tragically to Doodle for life, he also has a right to a life of his own. Everything doesn't have to be about Doodle. It's OK for him to enjoy the things he loves even though Doodle can't. This is why "Guilt and Blame" is such a big theme here. Too much guilt can keep a person from living and enjoying his life. Hopefully, by remembering Doodle, and staying connected to the natural world, Brother can find a way to live beyond his guilt.

Brother Then, Brother Now

Brother doesn't reveal the details of his present life. We don't know how old he is, what he does for work, or even where he lives. We know he's remembering Doodle while he's in the family home, though we don't know if he still lives there. We also know that Brother is racked with guilt, and his memories weigh heavily on him. Still, we can see that Brother has changed since his experience. In this section we don't want to tell you how we think Brother has changed, but want to ask how you think Brother has changed. Or, for that matter, if you think Brother has changed. Has he learned anything? If so, what, and how do you know? If you were Brother, what are some ways you could use your experience to help others?

Brother Timeline

Throughout this story, the narrator allows his pride to cloud his compassion and blind him to Doodle's limitations. He is too proud to accept having a disabled brother, and this is why he takes every measure he can to teach Doodle to do able-bodied things. Because of his pride, he does these things more with his own benefit in mind than his brother's. This story is a clear condemnation of blinding and debilitating pride, since the narrator's pride brings about the eventual death of Doodle.

Doodle is different from everyone else right from the start of the story, and the narrator has trouble accepting that. He cannot cope with the fact that Doodle does not fit with his image of a perfect younger sibling. When he pushes Doodle into learning physical skills, he threatens him with the thought of being different from everyone else when he starts school. But "different" does not necessarily have to be bad; Aunt Nicey is the one person who consistently claims that Doodle's differences make him special, not a pariah.

It can often be tempting to push ourselves and the people we love past their limits in the hopes of achieving a goal, just like what happened with Doodle and the narrator. Sometimes this produces great results; after all, Doodle did learn to walk after working extremely hard. But it is important to be able to recognize when too much is just too much. The narrator was not able to see this, and he continued to push Doodle to his breaking point.

This story illustrates the importance of family bonds, particularly those between brothers. Doodle clearly looks up to the narrator, but many times over the course of the story the narrator fails to be the caring and compassionate brother he should be; instead, he is more concerned with the implications of having a disabled sibling. Without the support of his family or his brother, the person he looks up to most in the world, Doodle's strength was bound to leave him. At the end, following Doodle's death, the narrator realizes just how important his brother is to him, but by then it is far too late.

Because this story is framed as a retrospective, there is a lot of room for the narrator's guilt to come through. The narrator flashes back to this time in his life with a wistful, guilt-ridden tone; it is clear he blames himself for Doodle's death, even though Doodle was extremely unhealthy to begin with and other factors came into play as well. Though readers are not given further information about the narrator's current life, they are left with the question of whether or not he will ever be able to overcome his guilt, move on, and be happy.

From the very first time the narrator takes Doodle to Old Woman Swamp, Doodle has an eye for all things beautiful. Natural beauty plays a huge role in this story, from the vivid descriptions of the house and its surroundings, the swamp, the storm, the creek, and so much more, right to the beauty of the fallen scarlet ibis itself. Both boys appreciate the beauty around them, but Doodle does especially; the natural world serves as a kind of therapy for him, a means of healing himself and moving forward in the face of his disability.

Doodle's life, though short, was all about taking people by surprise and exceeding the expectations that others had for him. First, everyone believed that he would die, since caul babies usually do. Next, they believed that he would not be entirely sane because of his condition. Finally, they believed that he would never be able to walk.  Every time, he proved them wrong. Even though Doodle ultimately could not overcome his physical limitations, his life was still an impressive story of beating the odds.

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